Thy world may be in peril
Don’t live in Haste…
Life generously bestows,
unless you care to taste!
You’ve craved for it,
with beseeching eyes!
What all you expected…
got nothing but lies.
So what? If not green!
The grass is still….
Until you scoop it,
Regret, you never will…
The immaculate sun,
and refulgent light!!!
How can you jus give up,
Without even a fight???
That mouse is awed!
sinking deep in milk…
which buttered its way out,
with the power of its will.
So, absolve thy self….
triumphing the supreme!
Whisper like breath of success,
quite mystique yet serene…
In aeternum!, follow thy heart,
Let it sing and sway…. :D
Plethora of joy and happiness
will sparkle all your way...(",)
13 comments:
good one bro...will keep coming back...
thats absolutely beautiful..
great one..
Happy Writing!!
:)
i would say twas an okey-dokey stuff & that's coming from a guy like me who knows shit about poems[:P]
but maybe that's me ...i just do not like emoticons in poems like these :D :P :X,etc.
okay i am drunk but wtf??
beautifully penned! liked these lines esp..
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The immaculate sun,
and refulgent light!!!
How can you jus give up,
Without even a fight???
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keep writing!
@ Sandeep and Shruti
thanks fellas :)
@ Shayan
sure man...I like to give it a bit personal touch!...my way or writing :)
@ matangi
Thanks a lot.. :D
Good work,
continue to do so.....am looking for your next one.
Word of advice,change your template..it dosent suit your work.
@ anonymous 1
Thanks again...i m not v much used to writing poems, still...getting such response ill definetly write more :P
@ anonymous 2
hmmm....thanks for the suggestion...actually I am not very much an avid blogger who keeps many blogs depending upon the themes...but surely in future when I start writing much more...ill definetly follow it :)
Devarshi..it was really a good one...have no words for it...
Hey danx sujay :)
hey dude nice act very nice poem....though im not a person who can ever write poems but love to read them.....
keep written
tc n hv fun
Thats a neat effort..
But I tell you, its so easy to slip into the wells of despair..Seeing the bright side is good enough but when you are down and out and nothing's going you way, it takes more than a pair of eyes to see the bright side..
Good job!! Keep at it..
awesome bro...never saw this side of yours...
keep writing ;)
"I am listening"
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